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Study 09 of 31

Force

The inner power that gives speech its punch

Hands-free narration of this study — good for the car.

Synopsis

Force is not loudness or violent motion — 'loudness is not force, though force at times may be attended by noise,' and 'nor is violent motion force--yet force may result in violent motion.' True force is inner before it is outer: it arises from conviction, which produces emotional tension, which grows into resolve, and finally issues in propulsion. A speaker who lacks fire in his subject cannot manufacture force by technique alone — 'the man within is the final factor. He must supply the fuel.' Four factors of force are within the speaker's control: ideas, feeling about the subject, wording, and delivery. The chapter offers concrete counsel on wording — plain, short, Saxon, specific, connotative, epithetic and onomatopoetic words carry more force than their opposites — and on arrangement, such as cutting modifiers and connectives and ending sentences with words that deserve distinction. Force must not be constant; variety, not perpetual vigor, is the greater art. But when a speaker appeals to wills and consciences for action, he must speak with the definiteness of conviction rather than the hedging language of 'it seems to me' or 'in my opinion,' for authority, not tentativeness, moves an audience.

Key points

  • Force is inner before it is outer: conviction, emotional tension, resolve, and propulsion.
  • Loudness and violent motion are not force, though force may be attended by either.
  • Four controllable factors of force: ideas, feeling, wording, and delivery.
  • Word choice for force favors plain, short, Saxon, specific, connotative, and onomatopoetic words.
  • Force should not be used constantly; variety and suitability to the occasion matter more than perpetual vigor.

Key texts

  • Matthew 7:28-29
  • Acts 4:13
  • Jeremiah 20:9
  • Luke 4:32

From the book

Chapter IX — Force · Open the reader

  • “Loudness is not force, though force at times may be attended by noise.”
  • “Force arises from conviction.”
  • “The man within is the final factor. He must supply the fuel.”

Put it into practice

  • Live with your subject until you are convinced of its importance before you speak it.
  • Cut modifiers, connectives, and useless words so the sentence lands like 'a condensed battering ram.'
  • Reserve forceful delivery for moments that call for action; use quieter tones elsewhere.
  1. Comprehension

    1. According to the chapter, what is the difference between inner and outer force?

  2. Comprehension

    2. What are the four progressive elements of inner force?

  3. Scripture

    3. Of whom was it said, 'He taught them as one having authority,' and how does the chapter use this?

  4. Doctrinal Clarity

    4. How does the chapter caution against overusing force?

  5. Contrast

    5. Contrast the language of force with the language the chapter says never appears in immortal speeches.

  6. Doctrinal Clarity

    6. Why does the chapter say short, plain, Saxon words are more forceful than long, Latinate ones?

  7. Comprehension

    7. What does the illustration of the theatre fire teach about force in delivery?

  8. Doctrinal Clarity

    8. Explain the four controllable factors of force and how they relate to the rest of the book.

  9. Application

    9. Where in your own speaking do you rely on volume rather than conviction to make a point, and how could you change that?

  10. Application

    10. Choose one habitual hedging phrase you use when speaking and plan how to state that same truth with authority instead.